John’s terrified eyes stayed wide open untill bedtime. “Can you tell me now?” Jasmine asked.
“That man,the mad-killer,” John slowly whispered. John knew it was impossible, they got rid of the him years ago.”I don’t want to be a spy any more!” He yelled as he stormed out of the Jasmine’s pretty pink bedroom.Their father, the amazing Tom Ping, was a spy himself. He forced the poor twins to become kid spies and work for his headquaters. “What’s up, mate?”His dad tried to immatate the slang language,”You’ve been a bit wierd since you ran in.” Suddenly the door banged open and…
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That’s awesome Nyasha!
I really enjoyed your 100WC, Nyasha and you’ve introduced an interesting new character, the amazing Tom Ping! I’d like to find out more about him. You’ve got some good ideas here that could be developed into a longer story in a comic or a graphic novel. I’d love to see pictures to go with this writing – what does the amazing Tom Ping look like? Keep up the good work!
thank you.