“Come on, we have to go” exlaimed Ben,
“But why?” groaned Ellie,
“Because its not safe!” yelled Ben.
They ran past the house, through the lake and into a forest.they stopped at a holt. Ben was remembering,remembering who the man was, were he had seen him before and what had happened.
“who was that?” wondered Ellie
“someone i thought was gone for good”said Ben
All of a sudden a hand grabbed bens shoulder. It was his farther.
“He’s back” said Ben
“who is he?”shouted Ellie?!”
Ellie was getting angry, she was desperate to know who it was.
“my brother” said Ben…
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I really like this Jamie-Leigh. Next time check your punctuation before posting.