John thought that he had vanquished Aedrial before but now,he had returned for his ultimate revenge! As the two teenagers stepped forwards, the tenebrous moon shone a vivid light at a unusual figure, the figure jumped off the the roof and showed his face.
“Dennis is it actually you!” Jessy exclaimed.
“Don’t go in this abandoned house!” Dennis exclaimed urgently. John knew what to do this time,John carefully took out his mobile phone and contacted the police. The police arrived, the police walked into the abandoned house, they captured the villain (Aedrial) at last. John was proud!!
mrslathamsclass 
I like how you used wow words not simple words. well done
DongNan,
I really enjoyed the word choice. This would make a great ending to the graphic novel.
Mrs. E (100 WC team)