One bright and scorching day a plover bird had to take out meat from a green and slimy crocodile.The crocodile opened its mouth so the plover bird could take the meat out. After 20 minutes or so the crocodile closed its mouth rapidly and swallowed it.Then the crocodile looked around and then he realised he swallowed the plover bird. He was so shocked that he started shouting for help.
After a while a mysterious monkey popped up on his face with a pepper to make the crocodile sneeze suddenly the crocodile sneezed ,the plover bird had to eat soft oranges for the rest of his life.
mrslathamsclass 
*Good use of describing words
*I like the of green and slimy words
IBF To Use more sentence openers
This is a very interesting story Ibrahim. Keep up the good work.
And say my hello to the plover bird who is eating oranges now :).
* great opening sentences
*great adjectives
EBI you don’t repeat “After”
Very impressive and descriptive
EBI you don’t repeat ‘then’
Great story, I like the intelligent monkey the way he use his brain to save plover bird. I am hoping that in future you will write more intersting stories. Best of luck.
Wow….. Ibrahim ! Fantastic story…. The way monkey help crocodile is really very unique idea. … wish you all the best….. & best wishes for…. bird, crocodile & for monkey on doing their best…thumbs up👍
Great….. ibrahim the story shows that you have a very clear concept to helping others… I love that monkey.. I wish you will become a most famous writer among your age fellows…
Ibi. … my love…. what a fantastic concept you gave about help by monkey character and kindness by crocodile and most innocent thing at all 3 are very positive…. very good step you take…..
What a wonderful story! I especially liked that the crocodile was upset that he accidentally ate the plover bird and did everything he could to save him.
Nice story Ibrahim…. Keep it up…:)