Quick as a flash Indiana Jones ran. “The temple should be just around this corner” he muttered. Gobsmacked, excited, in love he took his hat off and gazed in awe. For there…towering above him was the most majestic temple he had ever seen.
Walls of solid gold led up to a sandstone archway where an orange banner stood proudly. He forgot his knowledge about traps and ran toward the temple. The aroma of pepper dragged him towards the dining hall. If you like wine than this place is a gold mine platinum goblets were filled to the brim, spicy curries of all kinds and soft fruits filled the table. But a crocodile guarded the place.
mrslathamsclass 
* Good use of prompts
* Amazing idea for the story
EBI you double checked where your full stops are in the right place
Anyway, this is an excellent post 🙂
Hi Max,
I really like how you have included Indiana Jones as an inspiration for your writing. He has clearly given you food for thought in your writing for which you have described very well. Your choice of vocabulary stuns me and you never know what is coming next. You have done a very good job at ensuring your reader remains interested throughout. I particularly like ‘where the orange banner stood proudly,’ as you have gone one step further with ‘proudly’ and personified the banner. Well done!. Could you have included a wider range of punctuation in your writing such as : ; or ()?
Mr McKean (Team 100wc)
Well done Max.
I like your use of Indiana Jones as he belongs in this story of temples, gold, exotic food and scary crocodiles.
You have used punctuation well although in the second paragraph ; after mine would work for you…but a great piece of work!
Greg T Team 100WCAust