The lions mane danced in the wind as I stood completely still. My heart pounded like a drum, the lion looked me in the eyes. More lions surrounded me , their Cubs growing more exited. Each lion let out a humongous roar. Why did lions have to eat meat , why not cornflakes?
Scared, mad, upset I was cornered. I felt as if I was being laughed at,by the lions. Any movement and my bones would be crushed, but with all my courage I held my hand out, closing my eyes with fear, hoping not to be eaten. The lions moved towards me…
mrslathamsclass 
* Excellent description
* Tension
EBI. You explained why you were there.
Keep up the good work Rebecca! 🙂
I liked how you did the end
I love the similes in the start of your story