He was shocked to find a half human half horse creature “I thought I dealt with you before “he said with despair . The horse like creature turned to the door and gave a laugh as she left lots of things like unicorns and elephants in pink fluffy slippers, happiness then laughter came from the corridor .”After a minute of achievement “he let out with a roar “get him now”then he said again “get him now you” …………there was silence his mean and vicious lip turned into a upside-down rainbow . Sir I have never seen you smile like this . Ha ha if we kill that animal all imagination will be lost . Sadly the creature was killed . Only eternal darkness ” now I will rule ”
But sir there is nothing to rule .
mrslathamsclass 
Abigail, I really liked your ending! It left some suspense for the reader. Keep up the good work. Watch your use of quotation marks. Ask your teacher about how to use them correctly in your writing.