Quickly,Jerry started runningaway from Tom . Jerry tried
and tried to get up the coldblackstairs, Tom was making it harder.Suddenly the massive ,tall cupboard fell onto Tom and killed him! Jerry was surprised then Tom saw a staircase so he went up them.
When Tom got up to the top he saw heaven but then the gateway keeper gave Tom a contract that Jerry had to sign so that Tom didn’t go to hell! When Tom went to ask Jerry he took him some cake but he still didn’t sign it , Tom was angry very angry. Then suddenly the clock struck the demon was coming for Tom !!! Would he make friendswith Jerry in the future …..
mrslathamsclass 
A good ending to your writing Thomas. You leave the reader wanting to know what happens next. Your description describes your ideas very well and I like the way you have said ‘Tom was angry, very angry,’ as this shows clearly how he was feeling. Could you change ‘massive, tall cupboard’ as these two words have a similar meaning?