As evening approached,Arthur clambered onto his bed,leaping and jumping. Everything was quiet, silence surrounded him. Soon, the ground oscillated beneath his feet! Nervous,scared,terrified Arthur hid behind the cupboard; but soon the noise faded.”It was just a small earthquake.”explained Mum from downstairs.
He looked out of the window, small serrated rocks jagged out, pushing through the earth.”I think it’s a volcano that’s going to be formed!”shouted Arthur trembling with fear.It was not long before a volcano was formed.Boom!!
I love this piece of writing. I love how you have used a range of descriptive language to engage the reader. Well Done
Miss K
100WC Team
Melbourne Australia