The miner was exhausted hours of digging but he found no diamonds. As he pushed through the earth he reached a dim light, the soil sank deeper and deeper. When he got out he noticed he had been in a circle. Sleep deprived and exhausted he made it to earths core,he didn’t stop there. No more could be mined as he had reached bedrock. The miner only had one path to go.This was the last but longest path but he couldn’t find anything, his miner had no chance of reaching diamond. Or as he thought then he gasped…w,e
mrslathamsclass 
Hi,
Well done and thanks for contributing to the 100WC. You have created a great story, with great adjectives and good sentence flow. “Sleep deprived and exhausted” is a great way to start a sentence!
Keep it up!
Damien (Team 100WC) Melbourne, Australia
Hi thanks for giving me encouragement, I will keep it up and use a lot of new adjectives I hope to talk to you again.