They thought it would help. They were wrong…
Billy stumbled into the lab the guards following close behind.He was placed in an iron bed, a huge syringe above him. He was a terrible Assassin who had murdered many people . Meetings were held across the country to find an answer that would decide his fate. It was a death sentence. A toxin. Stab! The syringe was sent through his heart.
The toxin infected his veins. His strength was now unbearable, his endurance improved. Billy was now dead, Bane was born and he was focused on one task. Revenge…
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I can imagine the setting and “bane” very cool!
Hi Max,
This is an outstanding piece of writing! You have brilliant ideas and have used interesting vocabulary to keep the reader hooked until the end! I would love to read the rest of this story! Keep up the outstanding work!
Miss Baker (Team 100)