Slowly, Ellie opened the door to the grand bedroom door. She knew there was something eerie about that room but she still tiptoed towards the soft, pink bed. Inside the room was a blood red bicycle with the words ‘danger’ written all over it. Mumbling came from inside the bed so Ellie cautiously walked towards it . When she got closer she saw what was making the noise, a gorilla…a vampire gorilla. As soon as the gorilla caught sight of her, Ellie hopped on the bicycle. The gorilla laughed as she pedalled for her life. Unfortunately, the evil gorilla caught her, Ellie was never seen again…
mrslathamsclass 
Hi Nyasha
What a spooky story! I love your choice of words as they help to pull the reader in and they made sure that your story caught my attention. I hope I never find a vampire gorilla in my bedroom!
Keep up the good work.
Sam (Team 100)
Oh poor Ellie!
I wish she escapes from the claws of the gorilla.
If I have to continue the story, I will add that after Ellie woke up, she discovered it was only a dream. She quickly looked around to recollect she was playing with her little sister as they unwrapped the Christmas gifts they got, which included a big pink gorilla and a red bicycle, the previous night.
She imagined herself in the world of the gorilla and wondered what she would do if it were real before she dozed off and slept.
Thank you Nyasha for such a creative work. The highlight on the prompts makes it easy to identify them in the story. Keep up the fantastic work.
I hope Ellie escapes from the vampire gorilla and returns home. Keep up the good work 🙂
Brilliant work Nyasha!