Elegant, majestic, peaceful like a meerkat emerging from it’s den the deer cautiously lifted it’s head, it’s eyes combing the picturesque horizon. It spotted a sturdy stone bridge leading to a patch of exquisite sweet grass. “Clip clop”. It’s hooves beating the damp cobbles of the stone bridge. Suddenly, a dark shadow towered above him…
The creatures eyes glowed maliciously , it then roared revealing it’s razor-sharp teeth ( which looked as though they could take a bite out of virtually anything ) and it’s breath stank of decomposing flesh. It lunged toward him, the luscious green leaves rustled consequently deafening him. His last sight was the incandescent sun…
mrslathamsclass 
What a fantastic response to this week’s 100 word challenge! Your use of description is excellent, with powerful language to engage the reader. I look forward to showing this to my class in Durham, England. Just take care with its and it’s because you need to remember that it’s is short for it is or it has and its should be used to show possession (e.g. the dog sat in its basket).
Hello max
Your 100wc is realy good and you have used level 5 punchuation.But i think you might need something that we call (A CARP PIE)It helps us so it may make your writing even better.You have used alot of (IT’S).Mabe you can visit our school blog.
http://www.st-marys-deane.bolton.sch.uk/Pages/default.aspx
* great use of adjectives!!
*impressed by your description
EBI you don’t keep repeating “it’s”.