Thunder boomed veherently, towards the ground like a drum. The leopard, who’s voice was hoarse with exhaustion, carried on finding shelter. Demanding warmth, his matted fur, which was as soft as wool, drooped down unhappily. Excited, there was a pleasant cave, right in front of him. Tentatively, he sniffed the air, the welcoming smell of sandy-gold cornflakes dragged him forwards.
Struggling for air, the leopard wanted to dance with pleasure, however he knew that a fierce animal like him; could not. His mouth started to munch on the bowls of cornflake. Startled, a silhouette of a lion, no longer than him, moved towards him…
mrslathamsclass 
A great piece of writing Dongnan, your first paragraph creates an unbreakable hook although the second paragraph isn’t as powerful.
I love the excitement