Deep down in a cave, a miner has no knowledge of the surface. He does however have a bit of knowledge about furniture , Jeffery is his name. Jeffery can chisel stone and make fabulous items.
Gradually,he found a bottle of green goo.It flew round and round like the speed of light, it would make you dizzy,or worse sick.Jeffry dropped it in the cavern .It seemed to do nothing but every item made of stone changed inside out .
mrslathamsclass 
Hi Nicholas. This is a story in two parts. The title and the opening paragraph are fantastic and I was expecting the rest of your work to continue in the same way and in the same style but the second paragraph is completely different. Take away the name Jeffery and the second paragraph might belong to a completely different story. I think you became lost in your story and forgot any plan you had of a story about Jeffery and his stone chisel.