In the year 2000 you promised that you will give education to all children by 2015 . Only a half of 114 million have education . A third of those children have disabilities. The education of those young children lies in your hands only you can change it. There is a young 11 year old girl with polio who has big dreams! You don’t want to crush the dreams of a young girl with big goals so please don’t make a promise that can’t be kept. There are many children like Lucy that don’t have access to school. Please don’t give up on the children we are trusting in you to help.
mrslathamsclass 
Good work Conner, Your work is always perfect! keep it up 🙂
Conner you have chosen really good words ,you sound like you really want them to go to school. If you could add a question what would it be and why?keep up the good work.
well done Conner, you realy pulled the reader in and i liked the way you said things like ‘you realy wouldnt like to crush a poor little girls dreams would you’ great job i loved the letter.
Verry true but next time put in your punctuation so the reader knows when to stop all in all a good letter well done
Thank you Conner for your lette,r especially asking the Leaders not to give up
Thank you all for your encouraging comments. I am so glad that you spent some of your own time to comment on my work. Once again thank you commenting