The giant moles by Naife

There they where pushing through the earth banging, stamping, dashing in the city. Massive, ugly, fluffy moles which needed food. Making earth quakes “oh no!!” screamed the terrified citizens. BANG SMASH!! All the buildings where falling over, rumble scattered all around and thick, dark brown dust clouds formed, blinding everyone. The army and their tanks were destroying the whole city because the moles are as quick as thunder and they are taking cover underground. food was getting low so the citizens gathered all the food supply’s together and hid it in a steel safe only leaving a small amount that was covered with poison. The moles screamed and screeched as they died.

One thought on “The giant moles by Naife

  1. Hi Naife,

    I really enjoyed reading about the terrible moles, destroying the city. You have used a wide range of vocabulary which makes your story enjoyable and interesting to read. Just be sure to re-read your work before you publish it as you have a few grammar and spelling mistakes!

    Otherwise, great work!

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