Suddenly Jessie spotted him at the window. “who is that” pointed out Jessie “No it cant be i thogh he was behind bars” “so tell me who is he” “i`ll tell you once we leave ” Jorden turrned to leave but Jessie was already walking into the building .”Wait up” belloed Jorden as soon as he caught up to her he grabbed hold of her sholder and said “what are you doing do you even know hwo he is” “well maby if you would of told me i would “well he’s mastermind last year he tried to take over the world by controling peoples mind!”
mrslathamsclass 
Super work Conner, remember speech rules- new speaker, new line. Speech marks around the words which are being said.
Conner, I am amazed. Remember to check your spellings, I can see some simple words spelled incorrectly.
great work conner mate.
well done conner
Conner,
This was a brilliant 100WC. The concept was well thought out, original and left me wanting to know more. You used speech and description really well, just be careful of small typos.
Emily, Team100