This was Emily’s most terrible case of all time. Half the bridge was gone! Emily had loved the beautiful reflection that came from it. She was about to walk away when she caught a glimpse of Rosie Star racing towards the bridge. Watching quietly, Emily saw her place a box down. Once Emily had looked away, Rosie turned on a hologram that showed the other half of the bridge.
“Roll up, roll up, come across!”. Making a mistake, people went halfway and stepped on a hologram, falling to their death. Rosie Star: suspect # no1.
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What a clever idea. I would never have thought of that. I wonder how many victims Rosie lured to their deaths & how Emily stopped her. Very exciting. Well done.
Wow Rosie is horrible! What a great idea Amy, I agree with Mrs D that it is very clever and I never would’ve thought of that! You have built up the story really well. I want to read more… Perhaps you could write the rest of the story and post it on your blog?!
Larissa, Team 100