The scientists were frozen with fear and in the distance was a bee agitating repetitively through the air in pursuit.Everybody gazed out of their windows, temptation in their eyes as if they was going to stampede out of town. The bee was different, it had green eyes and a monster like sting.
Suddenly it collapsed to the ground, dead and inerted. The two scientists came closer, analysing the bee with such intent, finding out why the population of bees were decreasing. They had to prostrate their fears for what they knew they had been stung many times before . The bee finally got up, however it was evil!!
mrslathamsclass 
I love your opening sentence the idea of people being ‘frozen with fear’ paints a powerful image. You have used some high level vocabulary which fits in with the mood of the writing which is about scientists. I want to read more now and find out what the bee does next. Well done Jane Team 100WC Barnsley UK